You Shall Rise Again Comments

A beauty of a poem with a lovely optimistic conclusion! Thanks! -Raj Nandy

The visualization as I read this beautiful poem is amazing. I love this and I love the twist of fates as the night slowly fades to day. I also love the hope given in the end, you shall rise again. Thank you for sharing. Dwayne

Well done Jemarie. Excellent poem. The imagery is brilliant.

Very interesting and beautiful play between the moon and the sun. Since I usually sleep during most of the night and am not one of the worshipers, I don't think of the moon as being dominant, but your description clearly points out its role during the night and for poets it certainly has an important influence. I like your ending giving voice to the sun. Jemarieé, pinaka maganda.