You Shall Be Comments

This is a wonderful poem! You effortlessly create a paradaisal world out of the basic elements of the one we live in. This is not a poem which condemns sinfulness and argues we must renounce the world as the devil's since the Fall of Adam and Eve. You describe humans going deeper inward, into the subconscious, which is not an alien world of inchoate impulses but one that fulfill the longings of our souls. It will be celebrated almost as a festival of homecoming.