Baby whenever you come before me
You really set me on fire
My breathing becomes ten times faster
And my fever goes higher and higher
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Many times I have had felt this thing, whenever I meet a lady who sets me on fire! Thanks for sharing. Good write Dipy. worth the 9.
wow you say so much in the poem with the simpliest of words, it really shows what a great skill for poetry you have. Great work! !
Love it! that is what a guy feels when u see what u think ur dream girl? good poem Dipy! Sun
I HOPE THE PERSON U WERE TALKING ABOUT HAS SEEN THIS.SHE WOULD FREAK! NOT MANY GURLS HAVE THE LUXURY OF HAVING POEMS WRITTEN ABOUT THEM! KEEP WRITING!
You should be a song writer lol. This is a wonderful peice. Your a very sweet person <3
The girl of your dreams dipy and your on about fuel prices, hardly the most romantic move...