Wednesday, June 20, 2007

You Set Me On Fire Comments

Rating: 4.7

Baby whenever you come before me
You really set me on fire
My breathing becomes ten times faster
And my fever goes higher and higher
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Dipy Hermonite
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 August 2007

The girl of your dreams dipy and your on about fuel prices, hardly the most romantic move...

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Marvin Brato 04 July 2007

Many times I have had felt this thing, whenever I meet a lady who sets me on fire! Thanks for sharing. Good write Dipy. worth the 9.

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Jessica Rose 29 June 2007

wow you say so much in the poem with the simpliest of words, it really shows what a great skill for poetry you have. Great work! !

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Love it! that is what a guy feels when u see what u think ur dream girl? good poem Dipy! Sun

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~crazy/beautiful~ 27 June 2007

I HOPE THE PERSON U WERE TALKING ABOUT HAS SEEN THIS.SHE WOULD FREAK! NOT MANY GURLS HAVE THE LUXURY OF HAVING POEMS WRITTEN ABOUT THEM! KEEP WRITING!

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Janelle Morehart 26 June 2007

You should be a song writer lol. This is a wonderful peice. Your a very sweet person <3

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Anita Blake 21 June 2007

wonderful writing, great job

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