Sunday, June 21, 2009

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You say, you are here
But I can’t see you
Please tell me if you are lying
Coz I need some time
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Neeharika Sharma
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Piyush Sharma 17 July 2009

Very truthful have u been. You want to be a kid and slap and quarrel. But more importantly you will give love respect and trust. Well said. Your poem reminds me of a song by BEATLES 'My Sweet lord'. Though the song is meant for God but it is very similar to your poem. A concise, clear and very sweet poem.

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