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You said you'd always love me,
That my brilliance lights up the sky.
You said you just can't stop looking,
To the beauty in my eye.
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I gave you a 9 on this one because I thought it was written better.The rhymes were very nice and added a lot to the reading of the piece.I really had a good time reading it. GW62
This poem is amazing. Those type of relationships are hard and I can see the emotion in which you write with. Very good read...
You show really conflicting emotions in this poem.Love is strange that way.
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7/30/2025 10:38:55 PM # 1.0.0
a lovely write..rhymes nicely.. nice to read...A10... Ency Bearis