Sunday, June 1, 2008

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Rating: 3.8

Do I have to spell things out
To know I will be heard?
I've been half-cocked most my live
So lessons were not learned.
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Zarabeth Pawlowski
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Gordon Wilkinson 17 March 2009

your actually a very good poetess, spelling seems to let you down but a 9 - keep writing

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Dereck Gibbs 09 June 2008

i really like this one. i can relate to it

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Marilyn Lott 06 June 2008

This is a very open and honest poem. You did a good job. Keep writing and sharing with us! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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