You Said It Comments

beautifully worded, very intense, loved the use of imagery. thank you Michael

And you leap yourself in the torrents of pretence... Excellent ending... liked your this piece of work :)

you said it and I loved it

this is so profound..i liked it a lot, thank you

You said it louder than words Much louder than thunder storm Of love and dedication Of unbroken promises....so far if remained true to spirit....lovely words n fine one...10 read mine...words has got....i miss

Excellent finish…a twist …polarized…and a savor of poets… Thanks for contributing Thanks 10 Ms. Nivedita UK