A little puppy
Crying and hankering for milk
A naked misery
Lamenting and beseeching for mercy
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so magical.....beautifully written...with deep thoughts... three magical words...everybody's yearning..... so easy to feel, so easy to tell to anybody, but, so difficult to say to someone who hope to be a lover.... so difficult when it's not felt...... i like this.....10+++
OMG! ! what a poem...... dear im speechless... superb poetic sense i cant stop myself to give u +++++++++++++++++10
The difference the three words make....visually represented and woven with apt descriptions, the mood and methods of heart pre and post to the long yearned utterance.....all put together in a sensible write....Enjoyed it Kamran! !
A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.