Thursday, March 27, 2008

You Said Comments

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You said forever but you lied
You said hello but meant goodbye
You said I'll love you till i die
but once again you told a lie
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Jessica Taylor
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Jessica Jemima 23 April 2008

Great rhymes. Great contrasts. A sad poem... but it's often sadness that gives us so much to write about, isn't it? Keep writing =)

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 March 2008

The lies of love are many, The truth of love is one. But if you don't have any, No living has been done. GW62

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Jessica Taylor

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