You rush with a sword
then you conquer my own soul
offering flowers.
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then you conquer my own soul offering flowers. flowers and sword....... very nice haiku. thank you. tony
A lovely haiku on love, with strong but also tender verse. Ten points with honours! !
A lovely Haiku poem, both dynamic and tender! ! Ten points with honours!
nice composition, Julie, but I'd say it's a senryu, more than a haiku WELCOME AT P.H. and.. Χρόνια Πολλά
He who rushes with the sword shall one day get stucketh. Good poem.