Tuesday, December 23, 2008

You Robbed My Smile! Comments

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You have theft my smile
given your pathetic tears
leaving me in this desert
where have you gone?
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Kolitha Lelwala
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Dulakshi Wakista 02 March 2010

very nice poem.You've expressed your feelings so nicely.Heart touching poem. very meaningful poem but some what hidden feelings you've portrayed. Welldone.

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Dark Gurl 55 19 January 2009

nicely written i like it alot... <3

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Vinod Kumar 31 December 2008

Very good composition of dedicated love, Thank you for sharing, Happy 2009, Regards, Vinod.

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