Thursday, March 2, 2006

You Return To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

One morning you will wake up
and feel you have no pain
you may hear songbirds singing
you may hear falling rain
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Charles M Moore
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Brian Dorn 01 June 2006

Charles, a wonderful poem of redemption. I hope we all find his forgiveness as we return to him at the end of our existance. Great write! ! Brian

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Linda Ori 03 March 2006

Sometimes you just have to let them out for awhile. And if it's meant to be, one day they come to their senses, and realize that you are their salvation, and come back home again. And..............sometimes they don't. Linda

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Patricia Gale 02 March 2006

Forgiving and accepting one back, a happy ending. Lovely Charles. How I wish all things could be so lovely. Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 02 March 2006

And I just love the neat, peaceful finish, reflecting the circular journey taken by Person X, having come, as it evidently has, full circle. Yes, a poem of love, forgiveness, and kind hearts. Lovely. Warm regards and a score of 10 from Gina.

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Duncan Wyllie 02 March 2006

A coming home, Forgiveness.What a wonderful expression of feeling.Love Duncan

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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