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again a very nice work mr.mahur please come and again read my new poems-when and i pray for a scene and leave your fascinating veiws overthere

Beautiful love poem................

The first 3 stanzas are very pessimistic but the last one is bold and optimistic where you display your determination. Good write.

The first three stanzas are very pessimistic but the last stanza that tells of your determination is really an optimistic. good write.