Wednesday, November 7, 2007

You Remind Me Of.. Comments

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there's a hundred thousand people I haven't met today
scribbled on old scraps of paper that I meant to throw away
they're getting farther from the truth that I wish for them to be
but none of them are me
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Wes Thompson
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Greenwolfe 1962 12 March 2008

I read some of your poems but I couldn't find one that had rhyme until I came here. Yoonoos is correct about the message. I kept reading because I had a sense I could find one. I'm a rhythm and rhymer so rhyme means a lot to me. But what I really look for is a young person who makes the effort to rhyme as you did. I was pleased with your effort and your poem. You have talent. GW62

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