You Remain In My Writings Comments

well done! smooth flowing of feeling of love in your writing

a real display of simplicity. this poem needs to get rank.10

one of the best poem which i have ever read.10

Very smooth flow.... love the brilliant way of expressing how you've captured her in your writings. Beautiful :)

capturing that pure essence; anyone who's ever been in love and lost it knows this feeling

Well done! it captures the senses and puts them on a roller coaster of emotion. Good job.

This is a very nicely written piece; you obviously have a talent for writing poetry about human feelings now is the time to work at it....Well done. I find with poetry one needs to concentrate on choice of words sometimes what I use one day I'm not satisfied with the next....sometimes a poem can start out one way and after years can be picked up again and re worked so building a solid base is very necessary. Just a few tips here hope they help.

love will always be love...nice...

Love comes and goes at times.