Saturday, June 28, 2008

You'Re Who I Need Comments

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Mike Hester 28 June 2008

Hi Kelly, I just wanted to help you with one thing: 'Your' should be you're because it is the proper contraction for you are. Not that it is any massive deal. Everybody knows what you mean. But since it appears in both the title and the poem I thought it worth mentioning. Regards, Mike

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Kelly Freisatz 28 June 2008

This one isnt very good so sorry for whoever reads it

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