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Though the rhymes are not as good here, the poem is better. This is because the writing is better. It is more mature and thoughtful. Sort of like the ending of the other poem. I recommend this, most certainly! GW62

A very nice outpouring of the heart. You could practice a bit of restraint because a little bit more would make it mushy. Good write.

most of your poems are abut him..lol obviously u really love him.. he's lucky guy lol.. n yeh well written poem gurl really luv it..<3 keep on prettyin up ur poems