You'Re The One Who I Loved, You'Re The One Who Made Me Cry Comments

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly, it's effects linger long after the source of stimulation is gone. It's a lovely poem penned with insight from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

Wowwww.....too emotional for me, i just loved it!

I love the use of rhyme here! :) beautiful ending.

i've read this poem before and this time as i read it, its like am reading it for the first time...the words seem to be directed to me...my ex boyfriend, he loved me, and i made him cry....but i love this poem so much

Love is love and that is enough to say..no fool but love will make you drool and sometimes make you and break you. anyway, like this poem here. keep up the great work and always find inspiration from others. you are very young and I think you will have a good foundation for writing more into your future. shalom

OMG..! how tender..: '(the way you express is just perfect..!

wow... very creative and very easily to relate to. great job! :)

This poem screamed at me. What a wonderful poem. The words conjure up betrayal, love, sacrifice and how it all flows together. I LOVE this one. How can someone so young have a grasp on this shows how talented you are. Very nice and another to definitely go in my favorites. This just was like a spike through my heart. Fabulous and delicious is this poem. May I share it?

thats how love is, it hurts sometimes.

you have presented the same thing that a poet needs to be a rhymer. your story is not bad because the one who made you cry doesn't want to see you crying. I like your spirit of writing.