Tuesday, August 5, 2008

You'Re The Loser Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you’re dread and weary
Secluded and dispirited
You found me your victim
You’re akin to a vampire
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Paul Pruel
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Ency Bearis 05 August 2008

i got you a poem about cigarette? ...you got the point it ruins the life..just eat the lungs and form in cancer or to COPD...nice advocate poem...good job... Keep up your good work.. Best Regards, Ency Bearis

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Livi Topley 05 August 2008

wow. It is incredible, the second stanza really shows the harshness and intensisty of the poem. You really have done well!

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