You're The Best Part Of Me Comments
You're black coffee; I'm the cream
I am waking; You're the dream
I am Venus; You are Mars
You're the sky; I am your stars.
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I am waking; You're the dream I am Venus; You are Mars You're the sky; I am your stars..to your charms i gladly yield........beautiful love and romantic poem. thanku. tony
I really like the opposites expressed in each line, the rhyming couplets - this is a really good song lyric! I used an elementary chord progression on acoustic guitar, and used the last two lines as a chorus. Thanks for penning an excellent poem and giving motivation to write some new music.
Carl, Thank YOU so much! : -) Wish there was some way that I could hear what you'd played- - I love to hear my poems set to music. Gives them a whole new life of their own!
You definitely Ace'd this love poem which draws the reader in completely with it's lovely rhyme scheme and message! And a fabulous ending as well! 10+++++++
Thank you, Aqua! Who better to be a qualified judge of the merits of a love poem, than another expert talent in the field of love poems! :)
A fine love poem, addressed to a lucky man. Brilliant use of antithesis: 'circle'-'square'; 'yin'-yang'. 'You're the best part of me'.
Thanks, Michael, but if there's a lucky man involved, I don't know who he is, and may not have even met him yet! This is poem is merely my skill in composing love poetry from my fertile imagination (one of the best gifts a writer can possess.) I hope someday to be able to present this poem to some 'lucky man' (in real life.) Antithesis is what makes the male/female thing work!
Had my foot taping as I was reading this lovely upbeat poem. Great tempo and beat, with just the right words that add to its charm. A poem of contrasts with a little mix of apothecary, astrology, heraldry, geometry, philosophy, musicality and more and more!
Glad I could get your foot to tappin' Cap'n! Many thanks for the encouraging & comprehensive comment! :)
Oh! What a fantastic expression? .....You're black coffee; I'm the cream, I am waking; You're the dream.....so amusing. The last two lines......You're the He to my She; You're the best part of me......are too attractive. An excellent presentation on love. This goes to my poem list.10
Oh WOW Kumar, I am elated and walking on Cloud 9 now! Thank you so much for your generosity! A kind comment, a 10, AND My Poems List- - You made my day! :) Smiles to you!
you're the best part of me, cause you make my heart sing you are the stars and I am the night, you are the wings that had me take flight
Hopefully when he took flight, he was flying TOWARDS her, and not AWAY from her! (I just had to interject some humour in the midst of all the mush & goo of my poem and the comments!) Thank you, Louis, for taking the time to read and comment in the form of a mini-poem! You are the one who brings joy and light, you are the one who makes everything right! (Continuing your rhyme pattern.)
excellent - You're the He to my She; You're the best part of me. all best in best at the end the best without stopping PART of END.....................
Thank you, Mahtab! I think this might be your first comment to my work, although I notice we read some of the same poets and poems. I appreciate your interest and feedback!
Liked this so very much! Truly inspired With most loving touch And witty, elegant attire.
Many thanks, Sandra! I love the way you always manage to make even your COMMENTS rhyme! I tried to employ every symbol for male & female that I could think of- - Venus & Mars, Yin & Yang, etc. Just finished it right before I posted it!
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7/19/2025 3:02:37 AM # 1.0.0
You're the Yang to my Yin You are why my heart does spin. You're the horse to my cart; I'm the muse to your art. You're the He to my She; You're the best part of me.....very fine write..thanks
You are most welcome, Prabir. Thank YOU for reading! : -)