i met this guy, and
he invited me on a date.
hes really sweet, and he deserves alot;
alot better than me.
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the desperation of the speaker and the sadness of the situation are well displayed. the most striking, to me, was the speaker's point that their fiances deserves alot better because she still likes the person she's talking to in her head. good choice to address this to the man she actually loves, but not actually say her thoughts outloud to him, nice work ^^ Kath
Gosh Im Speachless This Is A beautiful Poem! ! love pumkin
nice write impatience is the present identity,10+