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this poem is one of the few I actually wrote out first... this one ended up being 17 pages,6 stanza's a page and 4 lines per stanza. I just too the more... embarassing parts of it and put it online....

dear katherine, the passion is the master in your writing here and that is a source of power, with time this passion will take a new style, a style which is near to be more condensed and more wise, thank you for your tender heart and your great emotions since the humanity is this, you deserve to be a great human being and that is alone is a great poetry......