You'Re Not Mistaken Comments

Deep and you dive deeper...dont let self sink and be another hidden treasure in the sea...return to the surface and breathe..bring treasure of your soul alive back...we did a mistake but everyone has precious soul in our own life thus forgiveness can easily given...or punishment will be forgotten..when heart is pure you can find your soul...it not gone just you cant see in when you down_Soul

Wow this is a profound and deeply moving poem. A good write.