When you can't get out of your bed
'Cause you have a bowling ball head
When you're stumbling to the bathroom
Tripping in kitchen over broom
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You depiction of human nature in its moments of weakness is blatantly truthful and powerful in context. A well thought-out poem. Thanks for sharing Richard.
Too be perfectly human is to be a disqualified saint, but I think their is greater depth to a person with flaws then a person who is a saint. Great write Richard. It celebrates humanity, not the sainthoods banality.