Wednesday, October 30, 2013

You'Re My No.1 Comments

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Since the beginning of time,
since the moon started to shine.
the first dance i danced in the rain,
it was you, who was in my brain.
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Praveen chaudhary
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Vikas Tripathi 07 July 2015

wow.... simply awesome.....

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Ashlee Vandyken 15 November 2013

this is beautiful, i love it!

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Poetheart Morgan 14 November 2013

Oh! I love that poet, like you said, very romantic poem and beautiful! ! ! !

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Praveen Kumar 14 November 2013

thanks jeevi... i just rhymed my feelings in this poem

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Mitran Zv 11 November 2013

the poem is nice. expressing the real feel.

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Praveen Kumar 08 November 2013

thanks a lot :) I didn't expect so heart touching words from you.... thanks for your comment.

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Hazel Durham 02 November 2013

Perfect in every way, so romantic and as fresh as a summer breeze, with delightful lines about the truth of love!

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Praveen Kumar 02 November 2013

thanks shalini and Kaylin for your beautiful comments... yup! kaylin actually I know nothing about poems and It's writing style but I really love to write. and I'm sure I will improve soon if I will get to meet people like you

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Shalini Samuel 30 October 2013

:) playful aand romantic write brother

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