far
the star
shining fair
in the vast sky
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Stars and dream go together. Here star knows your heart. lovely expression.
The stars always hint at the moon. We just need to find the right one. Nice my friend
Seeing clearly! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An amazing poetic expression of love and beauty..10.
The far star is wll painted here,10, thanks for sharing the poem with us
A brilliant poem, it speaks about the mystery of this life. Articulate writing.
Wow a super cool sensational poem. Fine shape poetry, creative idea! I luv the moon so liked this lots. Kudos.
THAT IS NOT A STAR BUT THE OUTLINE OF A WOMAN'S XXXXXXXXXXXXXX UR POEMSAYS GOOD ONE MB
seeing clearly my window with the moon...The star and the moon and your shining eyes at the window. excellent dear Mahtab.tony