Tuesday, February 26, 2013

You'Re Like... Comments

Rating: 4.5

You're like a helium balloon,
Floating away out of reach,
Always gone a kiss too soon.
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Hannah York
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Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

You have described your 'You so nicely in this poem. Four three line stanzas have portrayed your feelings honestly. A nice poem, good language.

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