You're In My Thoughts Poem by Aqua Flower

You're In My Thoughts

Rating: 5.0


You're in my thoughts
and on my mind
I think about you all the time
when at the sink
or in a chair
you're in my thoughts
and in my air
You're behind the dresser and in between
under the bed and in the seams
you're the tear in my eye
the fluffy cloud that drifts by
the bleeding cut on my finger
a strong scent that lingers
you're in my thoughts
and in my soul
I'm waiting for you, darling
hurry, we're getting old

The Lion & Tigress series
copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, August 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hoping one day my dreams will not just be a fantasy.This poem was inspired by Sandra's poem "Dreams of Fantasy".
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 26 August 2019

Great sentimental poem on love and thinking about a loved one. Reminds me of a simple poem I read a long time ago which reads: why, even in the toilet i cannot flush you out of my mind...

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Sandra Feldman 26 August 2019

A flowing delight, Sweet but with a lot Of insight And romantic might. A cool breeze, In love's desired sight. A pleasure to read, Aqua. Thank you for mentioning my poem. You did better, no doubt.

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Aqua Flower 26 August 2019

Thank you Sandra for your very complimentary comment. One can only be inspired by good writings like yours! Thank you for being part of PH and glad we are here together.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 August 2019

I'm waiting for you, darling hurry, we're getting old/// so loving and lovely poem

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Practicing Poetess 26 August 2019

A sweet poem expressing desire, and longing, and waiting, from one who knows! Very well-written! : -)

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Kim Barney 25 August 2019

You're not getting as old as I am! Great poem, Aqua Flower!

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Aqua Flower 26 August 2019

LOL.. Our minds do not age as much as he physical. Thank you for your comment. hmmm I have to go look now at how old you are...lol

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