You'Re In Love. Comments

lovely! ! truly touching!

Dainty love poem with a message in the last stanza,10+++

nice piece like lovely colours flooded on the screen in a charming pattern! good work Fay! 10+

Sparks, colors, and the feelings in galore!

write like this love is always with you it flows from your pen in ageless verse 10 +++ Chris

Another really nice poem Fay well done regards Tom

I love the contrast here - the 'colourless wing' and 'bleached with disguise' the the grand finale of fireworks, blazing in a spectrum of glory. A magnificent analogy - a linguistic picture of love. S :)

A lover of love! Well written verse and eloquently descriptive