You'Re Heavy On My Mind Comments

A young lionness heart beats...to the heavy-ness of someone close...she smile knowing her time is short...but day dreaming is all she has for the moment...she smiles to herself...the test most go on...you are such a dear soul...mary... 'mary' 'mary' how does your garden grow? you are a beautiful writer...I loved every word, don't stop.

young love is so beautiful.

young love is so beautiful.

Love is a distraction and so is life. It's so difficult to balance the two. If only there was more time in the day. Another nice poem Mary!

I'm really touched by the emotional honesty and longing of this one.

Lovable, an innocent invitation, the anxiety spreads all over the poem.Do not get dishearten let the life solve as it's a life's problem?

I don't think that you have hidden, avoided, or put aside any love in this poem.This was so deep that I thought I was there with you for a moment.Your A Star.Love Duncan

Mary Linda has said it all/ this poem has everthing that I expect from your work. the depth is just perfect, a truely beautiful poem. cheers Sylvie

WOW! Mary, I really am begining to see a much deeper poet here. I think that my challenge to you is begining to take root, because you ARE writing deeper work. Love this. Somehow, living gets in the way of loving. Well said, Dear One! Scarlett

Wonderfuly written. Words so true for todays lack of time, schedules, family and love. Regards Patricia

Mary a good poem is one that many can relate with...and this is beautiful in thought and sincerity. Well done! :) Angie

Deep love, keeps you going! !