You'Re Gone Comments

loved the poem an im sorry for your loss

my name is Meg Harrison and I am on this site. your poem is nice

It rhymes nice, but you should rephrase certain words so that there is a better general beat throughout the poem.

Line 5 may sound better as: 'You were always the one beside me'. Furthermore, if you capitalize each letter at the beginning of a phrase, it sounds seperated from the line before it (if they are meant to connect) . For example, 'You were always the one beside me / in times of great despair.' Its a bit jarring for the reader otherwise. Hope that makes sense! Take care!