Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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Sandy Player 29 December 2012

Fantastic use of ambiguity and possessive pronouns. Also, the use of seashore and sunrise really does suggest to the reader that this love was an impossibly ideal, fantasy situation which was doomed to end. Top poem.

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Angie Estrada 24 May 2009

man do i kno how you feel same thing happend 2 me once he moved on but i hadn't this tells my feelings

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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