Wednesday, July 4, 2007

You'Re Ever So Inviting Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re constant welcoming is slowly burning down my heart
And it feels like a part of my soul is gone
Don’t make me feel so contradicting
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Aiden Florence
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astonishing, beautiful, amazing, mesmerizing... very descriptive and very indepth, i love it... :)

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Casey Gauthier 23 October 2007

love it. and love your use of words.

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Janelle Morehart 08 July 2007

Lovely, very strong words and emotions. Overall it's a wonderful peice. Im sorry if this comment isnt so great lol. I am exshausted. But I love this poem. It's great and I just feel that many others will love it too. Dont let anyone tell you that your work is over the top. Eccentric artist are always the best lol. Great work as always keep it up. Cant wait for your newest work!

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Janelle Morehart 08 July 2007

Lovely, very strong words and emotions. Overall it's a wonderful peice. Im sorry if this comment isnt so great lol. I am exshausted. But I love this poem. It's great and I just feel that many others will love it too. Dont let anyone tell you that your work is over the top. Eccentric artist are always the best lol. Great work as always keep it up. Cant wait for your newest work!

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