Wednesday, April 1, 2009

You'Re Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

I went to your funeral
dressed in my favorite pair of jeans.
The mourners whispered sharply, even though
I dyed them to make them extra black.
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Paige Nielsen
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Rylan Ollivier 16 April 2009

This poem is great! I wish i could write poems without relying on rythem.

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Kaitlyn Henning 16 April 2009

Wow, Paige. I like this poem. To me, it is full of meaning and emotion. As always, you've created a great work of art.

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MuSiC HeaD 01 April 2009

great write, thank you,10/10

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