Monday, January 19, 2009

You'Re An Old Dream Comments

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It's a little closer than I've wanted, farther than ever.
It's my vision that's haunted, from this terrible weather.
A nightmare I've taunted, for what seems like forever.
My dreams slowly fade and fade...
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Hope Wallin 19 January 2009

This is such an amazing poem! It really struck a chord with me, since I'm going through a situation that perfectly applies in this poem right now. Beyond great.

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Cory Jensen 19 January 2009

OMGoodness! ! ! ! ! ! Its amazing! ! ! ! How can I explain it! ! ! I like the line. You are nothing but a promise left broken.....*hearthrob* lovely

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