You Promised Comments

No lover expects his love transient. He remains this nice memory as long as possible.

I'm not a fan of reading long poems. I've always believed you're laying all you feelings into a story that most wouldn't read. But this is wonderful and I gratz you on a remarkable poem.

yes this poem talk about certainty and uncertainty in love...about going closer...being further...

An ode to a love which you did grasp in the rain with promises maybe its your story nice work here regards

thought you were the best choice, You had melody and sweet voice, You spoke less but merely consented, When sincere proposal simply presented,

With a gentle noise, you raised head, Eyes invited me for taking lead, I could see future smiling and read, Ice was melting and distance bare thread

How can I forget that memorable moment? Rain was pouring and you stood in pavement

How can I forget that memorable moment? Rain was pouring and you stood in pavement, Getting wet with perfect natural agreement,

How can I forget that memorable moment? Rain was pouring and you stood in pavement, Getting wet with perfect natural agreement,

You promised me smooth sailing, Sadness or joy with zeal and hailing, Solder to solder and never trailing,

thought you were the best choice, You had melody and sweet voice, You spoke less but merely consented, When sincere proposal simply presented,

You promised me smooth sailing, Sadness or joy with zeal and hailing, Solder to solder and never trailing, Task and opportunities equally availing,

Consider it a struggle but not path simple, Task you may have but not time ample, Life may be harsh even worst than the gamble, It may just be test and not like sample,

I spent nights restless, Didn’t know but may be countless, Nothing was coming from your side,

How can I forget that memorable moment? Rain was pouring and you stood in pavement,

You spoke less but merely consented, When sincere proposal simply presented

thought you were the best choice, You had melody and sweet voice,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter,

there is a saying ''promises are made to be broken''...i dont agree on this statement..it is not made to be broken, but there are situations that are unavoidable and that is the hindrance of broken promises, , , , owwwwwww...promise? ....hmmmmm..lav this piece..

You chose a way with bold decision, No lacuna with accuracy and precision, Life is to be lived with full dignity,