You Plunge Into My Wet Lake Comments

Thrilling expression. A beautiful poem with sexual images. Thanks for sharing.

nice poetry spellbound by your words everytime

You are a great poetess indeed, the way you presented the sexual images. A beautiful and extraordinary (I'm out of adjectives) creation of art. Beyond rating.

I am familiar with the nightingale/rose imagery in Persian Sufi poetry, I even used such images in my Sufi-inflected poems. The opening line sounds like direct eroticism, then the tone shifts to what is called in English sublimation, , What is the significance of erecting A NEW DOME? It sounds like a different lifestyle, at very least. But if a writer like Rilke would write NEW GODS AND NEW LIFE, I'd read as a metaphor of psychological change. Is that how you mean it? I don't know how to ask about other things in the poem.

Wow, I though, it was smelling damp pond ;)