You Played The Rain Comments
You played the rain on your old mandolin.
A rusted roof laid shelter on my heart.
Song wove a weather coat out of a cloud.
The poem was as frail as daffodils
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Medley of melody with blend of romance…fantastic imagery… congrats for sharing…Sandra Ma’am Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Clicked 'MPL' n
this is romantic and stimulating Sandra....subtle yet strong in its intent and meaning..melodious in its music...sweet as a maestro's flute...wow is the word for this....
...And opened the doors of the Mind, Nice situation, thanks 10+
Gorgeous, delicate weave of words into pictures. HG: -) xx
sandraji so throw me to poetic ecstacy mercilessly! thank you...................................................
Again a very beautiful, lovely write indeed... I like your use of language, very flowery... your poems are music to the reader's mind's eye.... love shan
The most eloquent piece of perfection, like a fountain, your poems flow..., just reading the title soothes. Really so beautiful Sandra, a balm for the soul. Thank you
dreams on paper.. amazing lovely expression n ur words are soothing -mel
this is class imagery ma'm....your poems have soothing impact....great.....10
What a fascinating poem! You encompass so much in five exquisite lines. Beauty, nostalgia, intimacy, and grace. Your flair for metaphor is inspired, Sandra. Love, Alison ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Fantastic reality showed in it absolutely a great work, thanks for sharing the good fantasy,10++
beautiful poetic imagery... built skillfully on words- rain/ music roof /shelter/ weather coat... mandolin and heart...classic piece 10
as unnervingly beautiful as always sandra, always a pleasure. ben
The beauty of this poem is mesmerizing Sandra, what a lovely delight to wake up too. (You Played The Rain) a fantastic title as well, a masterpiece Sandra, a true masterpiece. Melvina
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i don't get it. ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?