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Very emotional! And a fantastically great write! ! :) Good job! 10 out of 10! Keep those marvelous poems coming! ;)

nice poem i love it, it has a rusty cage feel to it.......remember one thing- to live yr life on egg shells is no way to live...to love it not to do all things for one...but its also to tell them when there wrong as well.

i really like this poem alot it reminds me of me and my ex cuz i always hated when i made him sad or mad or upset i put all the blame on me and i always felt really bad so i can really relate to your poem keep up the good work :)

wow ash you fell harrrd lol. now that really is helplessly in love. you seem like a nice person. remember now. he is supposed to try and make you happy too. you deserve no less :) . good writing keep it up!

When I started looking for poems that described exactly what was going on with me and my life, I had no clue that this site would have them. This poem is exactly what's going on with my boyfriend and me and I just want him to know that I would do anything to make him happy. He has my whole heart and this poem says it all. So i give props to ya girl! I love it!