Sunday, April 6, 2014

You Only Exist Comments

Rating: 3.5

Beguiling eyes. Stains of wretchedness.
A stone-cold disguise. Facades of decadence.

No wonder we only exist.
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Joanne Teague
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Joanne Teague 10 August 2015

Thank you, everyone, for your encouraging comments. I appreciate it very much! I'm not sure why I'm just getting my first notifications of comments just now. *shrug* oh well. I guess I should publish some more!

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Hannington Mumo 09 August 2015

A well-written piece. I like your short lines and apt punctuation.10/10...

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Frances Kay 07 April 2014

A uniquely stated and thoughtfully presented truth ~ I like your honesty and presentation of a subject, difficult to present without offence... none offered but facts, that most would probably not hesitate to agree with...

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Laughing@ You 07 April 2014

I like this very much, Joanne. The flow is as harsh and strong as the words. Nicely done.

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