Beguiling eyes. Stains of wretchedness.
A stone-cold disguise. Facades of decadence.
No wonder we only exist.
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A well-written piece. I like your short lines and apt punctuation.10/10...
A uniquely stated and thoughtfully presented truth ~ I like your honesty and presentation of a subject, difficult to present without offence... none offered but facts, that most would probably not hesitate to agree with...
I like this very much, Joanne. The flow is as harsh and strong as the words. Nicely done.
Thank you, everyone, for your encouraging comments. I appreciate it very much! I'm not sure why I'm just getting my first notifications of comments just now. *shrug* oh well. I guess I should publish some more!