Monday, April 11, 2016

You No Longer A Part Of Me Comments

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You are no longer
A Part of me
Our story together
Could never be
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Terry Craddock 12 April 2016

You are no longer A Part of me classic in storm damage, excessive endings, when all heart meets all greed a heart must bleed, the error we would repute, is letting the greed assume a place from which to pierce more noble ideals morals, the sanctity purity of kindness to bless vagrant lives, wisdom teaches excessive greed consumes love life hope kindness, the beauty of intrinsic possibilities

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 April 2016

castles could not be built....all dreams shattered...the summary of your poem...written in a classic style...

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