Sunday, December 15, 2013

You Never Heard Comments

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You never heard me crying,
Singing my lament to a star;
A song that made the roses weep,
Like a mourning dove's repertoire
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Lora Colon
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John Brown 29 December 2013

A sad poem indeed, but very well written Lora.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

The inner feelings are always hidden. Beautiful poem full of love.

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David Lessard 20 December 2013

Sad, searching, dying remarks of love expressed without reward. Hauntingly beautiful.

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Brian Johnston 20 December 2013

For Lora... I can't believe that he didn't hear, and I don't believe your fear's true, I'd rather believe he fell speechless, and died for the love of you.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 December 2013

a soulful dirge for love's summon gone unheard!

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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