You Need To Poem by Zyw Zywa

You Need To

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My love is a man
he withdraws

still a child
but without parents

searching for the beginning
of a better world

an order like when
he was small, and he looks

at his hands, not as hard
as his father's

which made him feel
that sometimes you don't have a choice

and need to
but that it is seen

and rewarded, if you are strict
for others and yourself

because the cloak of discipline
can cover everything

Thursday, September 10, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: man
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Collection "Short sermons" #2
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 15 September 2020

Like any other character trait, discipline is only justified if it contributes to human flourishing, especially to the well-being of one's love ones. Healthy discipline grows like a callus in response to life's challenges I like your clear-eyed but sympathetic way of responding to things.

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