House corners sing a wind song to the blues.
The air randomly flows with shadow trees.
You come to me across the fading fields.
The passion in your tired face lights the dusk.
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‘For wisdom tells me all you have to give/Is written in the clean lines of the moon.’ Well poets have the monopoly to scribble so…and Ma’am you’ve done it…ably and its justly…fantastic… 10+ Ms. Nivedita
I read and I became amazed how beautiful the poem is! Magnificent imagery is used like 'Down to the missing buttons on your coat'
any comment I could leave would be like ruining the fresh snow with footsteps........can I say nothing...John
This has worked it's magic on so many before - - but it is still as potent today for yet another reader Sandra dear - - - it has winsome elegance - - - and an undertone of such pathos - - - - you are a wordsmith of real note - thank you..... Fay with 10 + +
'You need not know I memorize you, Friend Down to the missing buttons on your coat For wisdom tells me all you have to give Is written in the clean lines of the moon.' wowwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! exquisite lines of wisdom --10 anjali
I need to know how a simple piece as this has the complexity of interpretation.Marvelous writes Sandra dear! Regards, sulaiman
A passionate expression of depth......contentment...and...............love!
'.............................all you have to give Is written in the clean lines of the moon' despite no flowers a mouthful of love and moon lit face i can visualize right here...the quoted line provides a gem of an ending to this beautiful write 10
memoirs still blaze the love in unison as the halcyon days hides into shadow latching on to the memory lane yet the resonace suffuses by the remembrance..........................wonderful poem when poignant the remniscence, love still unditterd in resilience, great write,10++, thanks dear Sandra.
This lovely poem is tenderness, grace and dignity all combined to weave together an unforgettable moment in time for the protagonists and the reader. Thanks.
Sandra you write some of the most beautiful verse your work is what eyes were created for 10 Chris
Oh my Sandra, this is so beautiful, you are the Queen of poetry. Melvina
i love the last line, Sandra..i was really touched..All the words you've penned here are like magic to me..oh, how i love to read it again..This is beautiful!
The wind song, the shadow trees, the fading fields and the clean lines of the moon tell all I need to know.
You have a way of symbolism in my mind. I love that all to much. GREAT JOB! ! !
A moment in time, a sweet blessed moment captured so sweetly here, well penned as usual Sandra.--Melvina--
This poem reminds me of the movements in a ballet - beautiful, graceful and complete. It raises human love to a new dignity. Bravo!
not my cup of tea. but thanks for sharing with others. :)