Monday, November 14, 2005

You Need Not Know Comments

Rating: 4.6

House corners sing a wind song to the blues.
The air randomly flows with shadow trees.
You come to me across the fading fields.
The passion in your tired face lights the dusk.
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Sandra Fowler
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Bri Edwards 09 February 2014

not my cup of tea. but thanks for sharing with others. :)

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‘For wisdom tells me all you have to give/Is written in the clean lines of the moon.’ Well poets have the monopoly to scribble so…and Ma’am you’ve done it…ably and its justly…fantastic… 10+ Ms. Nivedita

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 September 2009

I love this one so much.It is heavenly.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 May 2009

I read and I became amazed how beautiful the poem is! Magnificent imagery is used like 'Down to the missing buttons on your coat'

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Wojja Fink 29 March 2009

any comment I could leave would be like ruining the fresh snow with footsteps........can I say nothing...John

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Fay Slimm 01 January 2009

This has worked it's magic on so many before - - but it is still as potent today for yet another reader Sandra dear - - - it has winsome elegance - - - and an undertone of such pathos - - - - you are a wordsmith of real note - thank you..... Fay with 10 + +

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Anjali Sinha 30 December 2008

'You need not know I memorize you, Friend Down to the missing buttons on your coat For wisdom tells me all you have to give Is written in the clean lines of the moon.' wowwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! exquisite lines of wisdom --10 anjali

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 September 2008

I need to know how a simple piece as this has the complexity of interpretation.Marvelous writes Sandra dear! Regards, sulaiman

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James B. Earley 02 August 2008

A passionate expression of depth......contentment...and...............love!

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Kesav Easwaran 16 July 2008

'.............................all you have to give Is written in the clean lines of the moon' despite no flowers a mouthful of love and moon lit face i can visualize right here...the quoted line provides a gem of an ending to this beautiful write 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 June 2008

memoirs still blaze the love in unison as the halcyon days hides into shadow latching on to the memory lane yet the resonace suffuses by the remembrance..........................wonderful poem when poignant the remniscence, love still unditterd in resilience, great write,10++, thanks dear Sandra.

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Malini Kadir 26 April 2008

Beautiful! poignant and dignified!

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Rani Turton 16 February 2008

This lovely poem is tenderness, grace and dignity all combined to weave together an unforgettable moment in time for the protagonists and the reader. Thanks.

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Broken Peaces 17 January 2008

Sandra you write some of the most beautiful verse your work is what eyes were created for 10 Chris

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Melvina Germain 13 January 2008

Oh my Sandra, this is so beautiful, you are the Queen of poetry. Melvina

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Meggie Gultiano 09 January 2008

i love the last line, Sandra..i was really touched..All the words you've penned here are like magic to me..oh, how i love to read it again..This is beautiful!

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Raveendran . 25 August 2007

The wind song, the shadow trees, the fading fields and the clean lines of the moon tell all I need to know.

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Raul Castelan 18 June 2007

You have a way of symbolism in my mind. I love that all to much. GREAT JOB! ! !

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Melvina Germain 10 June 2007

A moment in time, a sweet blessed moment captured so sweetly here, well penned as usual Sandra.--Melvina--

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Mary Naylor 04 May 2007

This poem reminds me of the movements in a ballet - beautiful, graceful and complete. It raises human love to a new dignity. Bravo!

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