Friday, March 9, 2012

You N Yours Comments

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My heart filled with emotions.
Your voice echoes in my ears.
In my eyes, your face plays notions.
The noise of your breath gives me joy.
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Varna Soyokaze
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Susan Williams 17 October 2020

The noise of your breath gives me joy.- - it must be love!

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Abhishek Tiwari 08 April 2012

Your feeling can be felt so clearly and vivdly through ur poem that you just sway the thoughts away..into the core of all the senses...too good..

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