You N I And This Moment Comments

Under the moonlight u both make an oath...this poem beautiful, the moonlight never bright as the love you both shared...Even it is only a poem but i think it has it own persona! keep writing friend...stars will read everything from yours

nice lyric poem full of imagery and metaphors. Thank you for sharing

it's romantic and imaginary, you could have put in some more romance to bring out the beauty. well done.

This is the moment we both used to dream You n I together; no one around to be seen.... this is what i dream.... :)

Hey again you have pove that you are great writter....... Again a beautiful poem........

a great great poem... sharing love with the one you truly love... oh happiness is when you share your nights and day with your love.. well done! ! great job.