You Must Be A Comic Comments

OOPS! now i said it twice. ;)

oh, i forgot to say............. you have some typos. i think sometimes PH actually changes a poem a bit when a poet submits it, though rarely. so it may be PH's fault, but it is perhaps your fault for not proofreading enough times. once in a great while i let one of my typos get through. oops! ! bri :) nice rhyming

oh, i forgot to say............. you have some typos. i think sometimes PH actually changes a poem a bit when a poet submits it, though rarely. so it may be PH's fault, but it is perhaps your fault for not proofreading enough times. once in a great while i let one of my typos get through. oops! ! bri :)

a very nice/interesting/surprising ending! i was first drawn to the photo; i don't recall seeing a swimming pool photo on PH before! then i was drawn to this title, as i fancy myself to be something of a comic. i MUST BE; people are always laughing at me! ! my favorite lines: You have been away for the whole week away from me, all you asked me was 'how are you doing? ' i'll send this to MyPoemList. :) bri