Monday, July 31, 2006

You Miserable Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

O what a dank day, miserable fruit,
Torn little porcupine stuck upon an ant hill,
We should feel sorry for you no doubt?
But what a funny sight you are.
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Esther Leclerc 31 July 2006

Wonderful imagery, Matthew - ants as tiny toy soldiers. Fantastic! And much more. I like how you switch gears as the poem progresses. A strangely compelling write!

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