Friday, November 13, 2015

You Messed It Up Bad, It Was Sooo Cute! Comments

Rating: 5.0

for all you did
I appreciate YOU
you diligently tried
to get things just right
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Chuy Amante
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Daniel Brick 15 November 2015

You identified love as the topic, and it's a curious, quirky, utterly infectious kind of love being celebrated. You don't narrate any specific scene or activity so I can't comment or appraise the nature of your response. But what I like is your sleight of hand in both informing someone they have failed (always a thankless job) and encouraging them to keep trying. The lightness of touch you display in both the negative and positive comments is perfectly pitched.

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Superb, And I love u for that pup.....So well thought.10++

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