Wednesday, June 13, 2012

You & Me Comments

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Often i'll ask myself, is love deep within me.
Would it fill the deepest valley, the deepest sea?
Mountains may move, their mighty peaks tumble.
And that's when I say, 'so long as there's you and me.
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Michael Cardozza
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Robert Cardozza 31 July 2017

A fine write, Robert...you display good structural movement.~FjR~

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Chinedu Dike 20 November 2015

Lovely voyage of pure bliss - that is love, the spiritual bondage of two hearts actively performing their divinely ordained duty, is well depicted in the poem. Beautiful love poem nicely written from the heart. Thanks for sharing Scheherazade. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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